Fanfics~

Hey Guys!  'tis Channie here~

I have just posted a fanfic and its my first one i'm being deadly serious about. Its a supernatural EXO fic and I'd love if  you could try it and give me some feedback...
Please?

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406075

The garden of Eden is in tatters.
The tree of life, burnt down the middle, and divided into two.
Each half hidden in a separate dimension.
Each half healing under a different sun.
Clouds of darkness haunt the air.
Tainting....turning....
It's not safe to breathe.

Six guardians are dead, and the other six mutated by the looming evil.
They're clueless and yet they are our only saviours,.
They must discover their own path before they can continue on their journey.
They must work out the puzzle if they are to save every one of us.
But they're stuck, trapped in this paradox of parallel lines.
They can't save us if they can't save themselves.

So we must pray.
Pray for the return of the light.
Pray for the triumph of life.
Pray that they put together the pieces and solve the puzzle. That they find a way out.
Pray for the fall of the haunting darkness.
Because really, these guardians twelve...
Are our one and only hope...
No matter what species.

(The description , please ignore it...)