Cigars On Ice Help! New Fanfic!~

Hello Peasents  jk

If you don't know, I have written another fanfic. Yes another Kai based one. Should I have him as my trade-mark like I seen many others do, ex.G-Dragon(kpoponly), Horikati Maki(madameeunhye) ^^ I already know what my next fanfic will be about. I will give a teaser to that one once I written at least 8-10 chapters in Cigars On Ice. I am debating over whether  I should use Kai again or Jaejoong which is my ultimate bias as the main character.

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Anyhow I need someone to read my prologue and to tell me if something is missing or etc. Usually I don't need help but when I write something new, I need to feel sure that everything is right. It consists of too. It's nothing to long since it's the prologue. If you even want to read the 1st chapter you can ^^ Interested? Please leave a comment

I will inbox you after words

Thanks

-Otaku/Aegyo