So I had an idea for a story. If you're a writer, please please read this and let me know what you think.
It'd be a hetero because it just doesn't make sense as slash. Like the girl really has to have a sense of being taught to objectify herself and that's where the problem is.
This would probably work better with Kellin and Vic than Jack and Alex. Or it might be some sorta crossover, I really don't know.
By the way I'm not religious or anything I just thought this would be kinda cute.
Basically, a boy from America (either VIc or Alex) goes to a small village in either France or England or Ireland (or one of those sorts of European countries that have a lot of Christians who are in little pockets and kinda disconnected. I think France would be cute because there would be a language barrier), full of very religious Christians. He meets a beautiful girl who works at a cafe (either Kellin or Jack, see, it'd become a crack!fic if it was Jack and Alex). The girl has been married off young by her family, and she's just had her wedding recently, and her husband's family gave them place where she works. The end up falling deep (since they're both hormonal teens) in love with each other after awhile, but the girl knows she can never be with the boy because she's married and it goes against her religion. Before he has to go back home, they do end up sleeping together, and the girl was a , who was supposed to give herself to her husband (if it's Kellin it'll be either Justin (Hills) or someone from All TIme Low, and if it's Jack then idk).
The boy goes back to America and literally can't think, can't dream about anything except for this girl he's crazy for.
She, on the other hand, is totally a wreck because she's done something so terrible, but she can't say anything, because it's bad enough that she's betrayed her God and her religion, she doesn't want her parents or her siblings to see her as dirty and impure because she gave herself to someone who wasn't suppose to have her.
So these kids are about 19, and she hasn't yet moved in with her husband. The boy goes back and he's all nervous to see her again. By the time he gets there, it's night, but he can't wait to find her, so he goes and wakes up all the neighbours because he doesn't know how to find where she lives. One of the neighbours tells him where she used to live, and says that she disappeared the day before, and she must have moved away with her husband.
The next day he goes to the cafe and the girl's husband is there and he doesn't know where she is either. Assuming this is in France, the girl is taking trains the away from there. What she's done ("I'm not coming back, I've done something so terrible"), is really eating away at her and she can't live with it, so she ends up in Spain, and apparently in Spain they have a lot of tall buildings, and she kills herself, because she knows that she's already damned to hell.
He stays in the village for awhile, hoping she'll come back. Even though he accepts that he can't be with her, he just needs to hear that she loves him, because it's driving him insane. He goes into her old flat one day and finds a note she left for him about how she loves him and she'll try to watch over him wherever she ends up. Essentially, he does go insane, blaming himself for her death.
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