Overdose Poem Ver.

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AuthorOingo_Boingo
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I turned Exo’s Overdose into a poem for my concrete poem project.
Overdose Poem:
I gave you all I had 
And you came closer
It’s too late to turn back
You’re so bad that nobody can stop you
 
Your love is the only thing that I want
You’re my drunken fantasy
You fill me with ecstasy
 
You wanted me but now you have me
But why do you hurt me?
 
I need a doctor
But he won’t tell me how to heal this sickness called love
It’s an addiction and I’ve overdosed
As time goes by, it’s harder to control it
I’m falling deeper and deeper into this addictions
 
Seeing you is a drug itself 
You make my breath quicken and I start choking
I shiver then sigh with regret
It’s like poison, I can’t escape
My blood burns the more you control me
 
People wonder if I’ve changed
I want to tell them no
But you’re etched into my heart
I can’t stop now, you’re already inside me
In this moment, I feel you inside me
 
I breathe you in and savor it
My heart is shaking
I need more of you, I can’t get enough
I the pleasure runs through my body, savor it
 
The feeling is too good to stop
But I can’t go on like this
We can control this addiction together
But without it
I’m nothing but a hollow shell
The reason why I live is because of you
My sweetest addiction
 
 
Im im such a horrible poet guys.

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Angel110 10 years ago
Pretty good!^^ I like it^^
lindir 10 years ago
Isn't this plagiarism? (Sorry to be the voice of doom)
Lizzy_ 10 years ago
Oh, that's pretty cool ~
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