♡ V.I.P Reading To Crush!?! {PLEASE T____T} {Mob Gangster Romane Sh*t}

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Author-rprotaku
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Read Crush?

 

It's written in a man's pov about how he had a crush and disovered the true meaning of it, from his own faults in life being a mob leader. (Quick summart of it)

So, I'm going to enter my story into a contest that is for my state and it was over the word Crush. The word limit was 3,000 words and it couldn't be anything ty because of my mom is going to read it as well. 

 

So, I will be entering it by 11-12 pm.

 

I would like someone to just read it to tell me what you think of it and if anything needs to be added or remove? The characters are fictional, but I had them in this mind for them to look like this.

Yep, that's Lana Del Rey and Matt Bomer

So, if you would like to be one of those lucky person to read it tonight, please post below if you are intrested and your asianfanfics username so I can invite you to the story! Wall me or PM me, telling me what you think when you are done. I repeat, you must read it by tonight, before I delete it off of asianfanfics.

 

 

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halfbloodprincess 10 years ago
me, halfbloodprincess is my aff username.
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