Beta readers Please!

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AuthorEryn13
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Basically what the title suggests. I have 2 stories for AFF I'm trying to finish and could use a beta. Mostly just to remind me to make it longer, tell me if the punctuation/ spelling is right and help XD. Stuff like that. I have plot ideas for everything I just could use a little backup...

I have 2 stories that still need Betas-

Masks: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1157842/masks-heechul-sichul-siwon-ddlb
Which is A daddykingk type fic. Its an accurate discription of DD/LB tho. Its Sichul (no hating). Basically finished and just touching it up and adding bonus chapters because I had ideas
Kim Heechul has a secret.
The so called Diva of Super Junior hates fanservice . He hates kissing and touching his fellow band members. He hates having to be strong and confident in front of everyone else. When Heechul is off stage he's shy and hides alot. Never leaving his bedroom. The others just chalked it up to Heechul being a diva. But that is far from the truth. That is just the mask he wears. One which he is afraid to take off in front of his friends.
Choi Siwon has a secret, it's one only his bandmates know.
Choi Siwon isn't really the innocent, straight, devout Christian the fans know him as. Instead Siwon is much more than that. While it's true he's Christian that hardly means anything to him.
Choi Siwon has a secret. One no one can know. A secret that is so ed he's sure everyone would scorn him if they knew. So instead he plays his part and wears his mask. Keeping the dark truth locked away.
So what happens when one day Siwon discovers Heechuls secret? Will the two click together and face the band united? Or will Heechul break and Siwon hide, desperate to keep the secret just that. A secret.

Unexpected but not Unwanted: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1186149/unexpected-but-not-unwanted-hunhan-taoris-baekyeol-kaisoo-sulay-xuichen-wolfau
This is wolf au/ ABO verse/ omegaverse. Its OT12 with royal couples and that will not change! Its also a long one like maybe 30 chapters? but I need help with chapterlength and such.
Tao and Kris used to be best friends. But that was before. Before they got their second gender. Before college. Before they understood the difference between Neuveau Riche and Old Money. That was when they were kids. When everything was innocent. And it's not that they hated each other or didn't want to be friends anymore. But society thought it was wrong so they just drifted apart.
Tao hung out with his omega friends and their mates. He had a couple beta friends but even that was weird for an unmated omega.
Kris worked with his father at their company. He worked his way up and was expecting to work underneath his father for a long time. He hardly ever went out but when he did it was with other alpha and beta friends he had made in college. So when his father died that was a huge shock. For everyone involved.
Tao had just been hired for the CEOs Secretary. The first omega to ever work at a big corporation. So it was no wonder the alphas and betas thought he was a call boy. A play toy for them to relive their stress. Finding out he was the CEOs Secretary pissed many off. And when Kris came in as the new CEO everyone expected Tao to be fired.
But he wasn't.
And now it's a few days after the memorial and everything is starting to go back to normal. There's just one problem.
Taos heat starts today. And he forgot to ask for time off. So can he make it through the work day and get home safe. Or will everything go up in flames.

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