Uhm...

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AuthorMr_Invisible
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Could anyone tell me if they get this?

If you do, then you are awesome. *^*

It's another poem I wrote a few minutes earlier.

I don't know why I write these stuff.

Oh well...

 

Silent footsteps walk the hall

Sound of sorrow heard through walls

Cries of pain and grief that lurked

Tears were shed yet no one heard

A drop that echoed through the room

That spread the hurt, the anger and gloom

As glasses shatter, walls would break

It was nothing but a house beside a lake.

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ohtheIRONY 11 years ago
The pains and sufferings one had to endure alone. The individual is obviously haunted by her/his past, and at one she s/he reaches breaking point. From the last line, I'm guessing that the person was in a way, trapping themselves. Like it was their choice for them to be alone, not deciding to escape the 'house'.

There's my interpretation. OTL. I'm probably not even close.
lindir 11 years ago
I don't know but it's beautiful
Tigger 11 years ago
I don't understand how the last line goes with the rest
967e24a69f2848b5fc26 11 years ago
i dun really get it.. but it was about someone who wants to be seen by others but can't.. and no one really care about them.. i think
lol
xD
i'm not really good intrepeting poem XDDD
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